Sunday, October 2, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Here's a little Six Sentence Teaser from a little WIP called Taming Rachael.

Rachael opened her eyes.  She couldn't resist him, his touch, his body, his voice despite how much she wanted to.  Being independent and strong willed, she allowed no man to dominate her.  Yet there was something about this giant of a man; all he had to do was look at her, touch her, and ask.  Rachael hated being so weak. She was a moth and he the fire. 
Writing sensual romance with a creative soul.


An Open Book said...

WOW- what a great six Mary- love the moth and fire comparison


William Kendall said...

Very nicely done!

Sarah Grimm said...

Wow! Very nicely done!